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"...Choose only entertainment and media that uplift you. Good entertainment will help you to have good thoughts and make righteous choices...Do not participate in entertainment that in any way presents immorality or violent behavior as acceptable."
For The Strength of Youth

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I love it! I read the first

Submitted by mike on 1 April 2007 - 5:34pm.

I love it! I read the first few chapters awhile back and I was totally into it. I was so happy to find out that you posted more chapters. Now I am begging you to post more! Ü. I love your writing. You can describe things so well. I thoroughly enjoyed the descriptions of Jee getting on and off of his 4-wheeler in a flash. The only mistakes that I found was in 4 or 5 spellings and missing words, but I neglected writing down where they were, because I was so into the story. Perhaps I will go back and tell you where they were later, but for now...thanks for the story. I can tell that it is a story for all ages. Keep those chapters coming!

-Mike

Can't say I've ever heard the phrase, "I'm going to take a tub."

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This is great! I was caught

Submitted by spazmom on 5 March 2007 - 12:27pm.

This is great! I was caught by the first chapter and had to keep going. When are you going to add more?
Gaynell Parker

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Thanks for the

Submitted by Dave Free on 5 March 2007 - 1:46pm.

Thanks for the encouragement. Hoping to get more up before the end of the week. Stay tuned!

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I love the story. It's

Submitted by Margaret Turley on 4 March 2007 - 3:42pm.

I love the story. It's great. I'm sure my nieces and nephews will like it. I'm looking forward to the rest.

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I've never heard the phrase

Submitted by David Woolley on 27 February 2007 - 10:03am.

I've never heard the phrase "I'm going to take a tub." I would have thought it was an error. It sounds so unfamiliar, that I would imagine you are in the minority Dave. But hey, those relatives of yours up on the hills above Nashville pretty much have their own dialiect.

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I wondered where I picked it

Submitted by Dave Free on 27 February 2007 - 11:11am.

I wondered where I picked it up! I'm telling you, tubs are funner.

Gotta run, them dogs under the front porch are puttin' up a fuss!

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Excellent read, you really

Submitted by Raymond L. Step... on 27 February 2007 - 7:38am.

Excellent read, you really held my interest, can't wait for the rest. Just a couple of possible typos; 8th paragraph from bottom of page, chap 2; did you mean take a tub or bath?. Paragraph 6 of chap 3; 'is' to 'it'? Ray

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Ray, thanks for the feedback

Submitted by Dave Free on 27 February 2007 - 9:59am.

Ray, thanks for the feedback and for catching the typos. For those of you following, you won't find the typos Ray found. I already changed them. You'll have to find your own. Don't worry, there are plenty to go around!

Interesting how we become accustom to word usage. In my family we use "I'm going to take a tub" interchangeably with "I'm going to take a bath." Never stopped to think that some may not ever use the word "tub" in that way. I guess you never hear the wealthy people in movies say, "Jeeves, please draw my tub."

I think we need to start an informal poll. Am I the only tub taker? C'mon, don't be bashful--are you a bather or a tub taker? Tubs are funner!

Thanks again Ray. I love feedback. Keep it coming--

Dave

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