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For The Strength of Youth

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Submitted by Dave Free on 16 January 2007 - 1:27pm. | | | |

"And that wicked one cometh and taketh away light and truth..." D&C 93:39

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I am very intrigued with

I am very intrigued with this story so far. Each chapter is great. I am looking forward to this sci-fi / religous adventure. Hope to see the rest soon.
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To see oneself from a distant is shocking. (distance)

Cheung Li you are my favorite little old lady What?" Cheung Li was exasperated. He stood up. His face disappeared. I’m just a little confused.

It’s a bit disconcerting to mix star wars and star trek characters. I’d use one or the other – not both.

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Both chapters are intriguing

Both chapters are intriguing on their own. Put them together, as you did, and I am mesmerised by their uniqueness...absolutely fantastic. How soon before the next chapter? T. Lynn

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Thanks for the

Thanks for the encouragement. Chapter 3 is getting close. Hopefully within the next few days. Thanks for reading! Dave

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